[Story] Don't Forget The Hero . . . Ch. 1

Don't forget the Hero who once saved the earth from total destruction . . .

Once there was a young boy named Ryan, he was a normal boy just like any other boy or girl. One time he saw a stang glowing light younder down the street. No one was there to see or to be heard, so the boy thought it would be a adventure for him. He always like adventures. So, he went down the alley to see what the glowing light was. And he would of never thought he would see this green looking human. He started running away when he tripped on a huge rock blocking a door entry. Then the Green human saw the human and started running in his big ship. Then these 3 robotic looking monsters came out. He couldin't belive it. These things look just like the robots of of the terminator. THe terminators start shooting at ryan and one of them shoot his leg he fell to the ground. And they picked him up and carryed him to the shp. When Ryan waked up he was strapped to this metal table. With all diffrent looking tools in front of his face and beside him. Then the green looking human came out and gave him sleeping gas. Then after he fell asleep the green human start oberating on him. Then Ryan waked up and felt super strong. And broke the strapps and start running super fast. And started destroying the robots then he ran out side of the ship and pciked it up and threw it up out of site then lazer beams out of his eyes. And it vanished.

This is the tale of the one Hero who wasn't afraid to save are race.


Wrote By: Ryan541

Ch. 2 coming soon . . .

deth, seriously! If you have THIS big of a problem just report it. Please keep the editing the posts to a minimum! Cause, it's getting out of hand.


I am removing all of the posts.
THANKS.

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Nice story ryan

Yer nice story, but when do u get time to do this, shouldn't u be either at school, partying, studying or playing games? It quite out-landish and some of the structure is a bit basic but that my only critic but yet you are younger than me so nice work!

Zanzaba wrote:

deth, seriously! If you have THIS big of a problem just report it. Please keep the editing the posts to a minimum! Cause, it's getting out of hand.


I am removing all of the posts.
THANKS.

Very sorry about that. Next time I will report it.

Anyways, nice story Ryan. Waiting for number two.

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*sighs* damn, do i feel like an ass right now. D:

Deth, dont feel bad it was simply a lack of judgment, so its all good be happy and Ryan this story is so wide maybe make it more particular and still waiting on part 2